Film Pitch

Transcript 

D:Hello! I am Dawn 

G:I’m Georgina 

J:And I’m James 

D:And we are the producers of 

G:Romantistars new movie 

J:Endless

D:A story about Charlie a powerful business woman

G:Who made a promise to her younger self

DAnd Sam a school boy

G:Who was a bully from her younger years

J:Pay attention (motions to watch)

D:Now I’m sure your thinking this is just another

G:"boy meets girl" story

D:But wait

G:There’s a twist

D:Charlies promise is to be successful and she holds true to it

G:That is until she sees Sam standing in her lobby in later years

D:Memories flood back, along with tears and fears she thought she had left behind her

G:How will Charlie get over this?

D:Find out

G:By watching

All:Endless.

feedback

Me : "would you watch the film after watching this and why?"
Chloe, 18, female, sixth form student :"yes! i think some interesting points were raised, although i feel like some parts could have been presented better"

Me :  "Are there any improvements I could have made to represent my Romantic Comedy in my pitch?"
Steph, 17, female, college student : "yeah, i think you could have made the theme of the clip more romantic sounding, apart from that it seems ok."

Me : "would you want to go to a cinema to see this film based on the film pitch?"
James, 19, male, university student : "yeah, it seems fun to start with i would expect it to get a little boring after a while"